The plan now is to let it sit for a few days... bug my crit partners to read it... and then do any re-writing and polishing that I'm sure it'll need. In the meantime I'm rewriting the synopsis I sent to Lucy as I've since brainstormed this story with some fabulous writer-type-friends and planned what I hope will be a much stronger ending.
So, I'll rewrite the synopsis, polish the partial and send it to Lucy. Hopefully she isn't annoyed that I'm doing so before she's responded on the proposals. Hopefully she sees it as enthusiasm instead :)